To the belief,
To the strength of
the heart
My heart sings a song
While walking in the rain.
To the overcast
shadows,
To the ghosts of the
imaginings
My weakness makes me
strong
While playing in the rain.
To the never dying
sunlight
To the magnanimity of
the dreams
My future beckons me
While being mesmerized in the rain
To the past, present
and future
To the boulevard of
magical visions
My feet dance to the
tunes to life
While dancing in the rain
Rain is only but a
season
A reason more than
season.
Rain is only but an
expression
An action more than
expression.
Life is only but a
celebration
A meaning more than
celebration
Life is only but a
journey
A lesson more than
journey.
Rain and Life are
only but words
Thoughts more than
words.
Walking in the rain
and life are only but options
Dancing more than
walking.
Just rambling in the
rain, as the droplets touch my heart
They shout out loud,
Life is only but a
rainbow,
A rainbow more than
sunshine;
Life is only but a
rainbow,
A rainbow more than
rain;
Life is only but a
rainbow,
A rainbow worth walking
Because inspiration lies no where else but looking for it within.
Thank you, Viji Subramaniam Ma'am for the encouragement and belief you showed.
Very good start. Keep going. Sky too is not the limit for fighters n achievers.
ReplyDeleteThank you, paa :)
DeleteWow! Am glad you wrote this. I have seen the hidden talent. You will go a long way as your understanding of life, teaches people the true meaning of it. After all, poetry is only a reflection. A reflection more than yourself. ;)
ReplyDeleteKeep writing, baby
Heheh.. Thank you so much. ')
DeleteWonderful Sanskriti! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks shetty boy :)
DeleteHey.. ! I don't have much knowledge about poetry that I can give you feedback.. but I can feel the depth in your poem..keep up the good work going hoping for more wonders like this to come soon.. :) best wishes
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Thanks jayesh :)
DeleteA genuine effort not gone to waste. They rhythm and rhyme are well placed as is the meaning and intent. As the narrative transgresses verse after verse there emerges different walks of life audaciously walking towards a pretty enjoyable rain :) ! Well done Sanskriti.
ReplyDeleteA genuine effort not gone to waste. The rhythm and rhyme are well placed as is the meaning and intent. As the narrative transgresses verse after verse there emerges different walks of life audaciously walking towards a pretty enjoyable rain :) ! Well done Sanskriti.
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